As you could notice i have changed the subtitle from: 'New exclusive video' to 'New interview with Muse' where i used stroke effect and white and red colours scheme so it's match with the whole cover page and it's stand out. I was also advised to make the subtitle 'Shock! Paramore split' more stand out where as you can see, I used a stroke with the red colour, so it match with the red and yellow lines on the bottom and with other red line on the right side.
My final contents page looks a bit different as before as I was advised to put more information's about what's going to be there to make this page look more busy and important. I was also advised to make the middle person look a bit more stand out so I used a stroke and yellow colour again, as now you can tell he is the leader of T.R.B - The Rock Band.
In my final double spread page, i was advised to make the writing smaller and in the same size. I was also advised to make the text with a straight lines on the left side, to make the whole page look busy with a lot if details and information's in it. I also been told to put the page number on the right side of corner as it add to a whole page professional effect.After having a consultations with my media teachers about how to improve and change my cover page, contents page and double spread page. I am very pleased with the whole design of 'Gravity' as it's different, original, creative, new and rocky.








